Saturday, 5 September 2015

Short Story Writing-Don't Waste Your Words On Wasted Words!

The quick story market place generally demands tight word counts from the writer. Right here are some recommendations on how to preserve that word count below manage!

Brief stories written particularly for inclusion in weekly or month-to-month magazines are a profitable supply of earnings for any writer. The spend price per word is frequently higher and the returns are excellent for the length of time devoted to any 1 story.

However this marketplace has its personal disciplines and 1 cardinal rule that aspiring writers need to obey is the word count. This is the necessary quantity of words demanded by magazine editors for any story submitted and, while there could be some leeway, it often is not excellent. For 'five minute fiction' sort stories it could be as small as fifty words.

This discipline is typically discovered by new writers to be one particular of the hardest to master. They write a story - and it may perhaps be a really excellent story - then locate it is two or 3 hundred words 'heavy'. I've performed this myself quite a few instances when I began writing fiction and articles. It can be really disheartening to comprehensive a story, sit back in satisfaction and hit the word count button only to see it ring up quite a few hundred words 'over the limit.'

How, I asked myself at the time, can I most likely lower my story by that kind of length? Let's face it, a 'five minute fiction' sort story may well only have a word length requirement of one particular,000 words - to attempt and reduce one particular,300 down to one,000 seemed to me, at that time in my writing profession, a stark impossibility. How to do it?

That is when I started to study about points like wasted words. While in this article I absolutely never have space to go over just about every aspect of this topic, at least I can list some of the worst culprits that new writers seem to use time and time once again - like I did!

A lot of words and phrases hardly ever add something to a sentence. Prevent those anytime you can. A pretty quick list of some of those offenders:

Extremely, incredibly, really, as it have been, additionally, it can be observed that, it has been indicated that, generally, generally, completely, entirely, as a result, it need to be remembered that, it need to be noted that, consequently, it is crucial that, at the present moment in time.

Those are fine in their spot, but they generally locate their way into your writing with the sinister objective of tempting you into the sin of padding your sentences.

I'm convinced that the habit of padding sentences has at its root academic and, in particular, bureaucratic writing. Do not have I observed one particular of those varieties of prose without having the most outlandish and rambling sentences integrated - you almost certainly know the form of thing I imply. Such horrors as 'It will have to constantly be remembered that' and 'Morover and not withstanding something to the contrary, it has been previously indicated' abound.

Given that such letters are study by folks in our ever-freer reading society, the tendency is to feel that they are not only right but also desirable inside any type of writing. Rubbish. Unless for impact, they ought to be excluded. Quick stories are lean and fit, not bloated and slow.

S0 - how to 'lean-off' your story? Firstly verify for any of the phrases above in the 'list of offenders'. Strike them out. Subsequent study via your story and ruthlessly delete any and every single word that you can while nonetheless preserving grammatical sense. I assure that you will be amazed at the quantity that go.

Verify in particular for adverbs and adjectives. I am speaking about sentences like 'How would I know?' he asked angrily. Substantially superior is 'How the hell must I know?' The second sentence (without the need of the adverb) implies anger in its use or words and is Significantly stronger anyway - and shorter. In the similar vein, 'a extremely light wind' will have to be 'a breeze'. Not only are you saving wordage by adopting this correcting tactic, you are strengthening your writing.

When you have completed those tasks study your story once again. If my personal practical experience is something to go by, not only will you have dumped these excess words to bring your story into its wordage 'window' but also you are going to virtually obtain that it reads Significantly far better. Congratulations - you have just mastered a standard facet of self-editing!

In conclusion, just remember those couple of items:

The adjective is the enemy of the noun. (opt for a stronger noun alternatively of working with an adjective.)
The adverb is enemy of the verb. (Attempt to convey which means by way of word usage rather of making use of an adverb.)

Never use any of the list of 'wasted words' above.

Do not use a extended word, or two words, when one quick word fits the bill.

Preserve those 4 issues in thoughts and watch your quick story writing strengthen!

Steve Dempster writes fiction and informative articles for the net. Understand additional about how to kickstart your writing profession Right here!

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